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Open Poetry #47
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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0 posted 2011-10-20 11:24 PM


She took her clothes off
Like the autumn wind for the ashes of tomorrow

Her hair so beckon back
The villagers fell below their knees
Like the slow crawl of the sunset to the East

Her back, small of palms on westward hands
She on the tinge of the lighted sun
The brazen fields of the east
So filled with joy

Her ease onto the catchers void.
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2011-10-21 06:23 AM

This is cool!

Lori
Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
2 posted 2011-10-21 03:33 PM

Thanks, Lori.  Happy you enjoyed

Cheers
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