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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-10-20 08:34 AM

summer was the slender limb dawn
her beckon tree was damp with saliva
she pressed nipple fingers in my panting places

then with autumn there came the balance
her scales were polished like orgasms
and she was hidden behind the fog hounds often

til the noon of days she would be liquid
making the noises of daring to my thirst
but being sealed inside her proper hermetic

and now the winter brings her sparse limbs
still the long bows of seduction, nude drawn
but without the need of an arrow to splinter

she is a hurry song and dark waits with daring eyes

____________

daark

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-10-20 10:30 AM

Your poetry is like bath water, makes me want to just sink into it and soak it up awhile....

Nice autumn undertones you wrote.

Hugs dude~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-10-20 10:53 AM

Babyblue, thanks lady friend, I like the visual.

Eusta B. Mae 2
Junior Member

since 2011-10-20

Posts 15
state of confusion

3 posted 2011-10-20 11:18 AM

Pretty hot stuff there D. Long time no see.
You haven't lost your touch. ebm

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-10-20 12:02 PM

Ms Ebm, thanks ms for the touch

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2011-10-21 06:46 AM

Excellent, as your poems always are..

I am feeling a little spent myself, welcoming the fall to lose her adornment,that has been torn by much rain, and windy weather.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2011-10-21 07:14 AM

Ice amigo, thank you much for the read

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2011-10-22 02:42 PM

..."and dark waits with daring eyes" ~ Of that, I have no doubt!

EA

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2011-10-23 07:08 AM

ms EA,,,thanks lady...smiling..

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2011-10-23 05:24 PM

Really, I don't know why, but my first
envisage of the poem
was of the Lady, Liberty...

who sees all, says nothing, but still
there is the lightest of smile,
in an all knowing ever.

Ever awaits...even in shadows.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2011-10-24 08:56 AM

sweetsun...I suspect she and the dawn both have that in common. Thanks lady!!

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