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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-10-18 06:12 PM


Love.
What is it?

Describe it for me please.
I mean,
how do you go about it?
Do you have a certain hunch?
Because you see someone you'd like to go to bed with,
Izat it, izat love? Huh? Whadda say?

Love.
Will love make you want to disrupt your life
to accommodate the one you love?
What happens when one
accommodates more?
Is that love?
You say to me,
yes, it is love because you love enough
to give more.
Uh huh, I understand,
but does that mean the one doing all the taking
doesn't love?
Or at least not as much as you?

Is there such a thing
as falling out of love, and how do you do that?
Maybe one day you realize that
you're doing all the giving.
Would that make a difference
and send love packing?
Or,
is it possible to wear love
like a pair of gloves,
removing it when it pleases you
replacing it when you think the time is right.

Oh, and can anyone fall in love?
Question is being asked
because I see so many people
(poets mainly)
yearning for love, yet love
never wanders down their street.
Can a fool love?
More to the point, can love fool you?

If you press your lips against another,
is that love?
Maybe you have to slip in a little tongue,
that would surely be love, huh?
Of course too much of the tongue-tied together
(thank you Lori)
will find you buck-ass naked
in bed or a backseat in a secluded place.
Or wherever.
Somehow you always find a place.
And during this exciting and stimulating tryst
one of you mouths
I love youuuu.
Well, you have to mouth it back, don't'cha?

Getting off track heah.
Lost my train of thought.
(Wonder who first said train of thought?)

Love.
What is it?

©October 17, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

© Copyright 2011 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-10-18 06:30 PM


You are more than welcome, I'm flattered.
Dearest poet your question has been posed since love began. And it is of the poets an answer they demand. There are all kinds of love. What love are you wanting to know more about?

Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-10-18 06:45 PM


Just a poem, Lori, I know about love about as much as anyone does, I think. Just a poem.

~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-10-18 07:21 PM


I know it is just a poem my friend, and it is a darn good one.  I also know you know about love because I've read your work. You know me, sometimes my comments are a little off the wall...
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-10-18 08:11 PM


Hush yo self, Lori. Wasn't anything wrong with your comment.

~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2011-10-18 11:56 PM


The 64 thousand dollar question.
Great insight Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

suthern
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6 posted 2011-10-19 09:06 AM


Can a fool love?
More to the point, can love fool you?

Speaking strictly from personal experience... Most definitely YES to both! LOL

I enjoyed this poetic ponder. *S*

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
7 posted 2011-10-19 09:07 AM


Love should be simple
but we would miss out
on the attempts to define
in poetic intoxication
that draws us to words
such as yours

JerryPat2
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8 posted 2011-10-19 09:31 AM


Yep, it is that, JL, thanks for stopping by.

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suthern, I am convinced most people will answer yes to those two questions also. Appreciate you being here.

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Ah, love should be simple, EmmaRose, but it is not. Still, we try and try and try and . . .

~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
9 posted 2011-10-20 01:49 AM




that age old question Jerry
nicely done


"Love is...
You've got the softest lips ~ Stevie Nicks"


latearrival
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Florida
10 posted 2011-10-20 02:26 AM


We were told we were "too young". It lasted 47 years.Some times it works just fine. no complaints.jo
JerryPat2
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11 posted 2011-10-20 07:58 AM


latearrival, yep, it happens that way, I've seen it before myself. Thanks for the read and comment.

~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

JerryPat2
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12 posted 2011-10-20 07:59 AM


Hahaha!! Love your reply, The Lady, yes indeed. Thank you for being here.

~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

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