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Dinosr
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since 2011-10-08
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0 posted 2011-10-17 12:31 PM



Friendly Advice



Of all the things a person learns,
from birth, till their last sleep;
there's nothing more important than,
you sow just what you reap.

It seems to be a puzzle now,
but life will let you know;
It's not how deep you plant the seed,
it's where you choose to sow.

So show a little tenderness,
the seeds of love are few;
the blooms that grow from total love,
will come right back to you.




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1 posted 2011-10-17 01:18 PM


Welcome to Passions! I like this a lot even if I don't always believe the adage.
JL
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2 posted 2011-10-17 01:26 PM


"blooms that grow from total love,
will come right back to you."

Nice write.
Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
3 posted 2011-10-17 02:27 PM


Lovely advice, but sometimes life has a way of bring storms which destroy all those seeds. Not criticizing the poem, which I liked, just saying . . .

Welcome to PiP.

~* The saddest words of tongue or pen are the words It might have been.--John Greenleaf Whittier ~*~

Michael
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4 posted 2011-10-17 02:34 PM


Advice we all should heed.  Indeed, it's where you sow that counts.  Thank you for the gentle reminder.


Michael



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