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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-10-16 08:49 AM

knowing the song of highways along this brim of time
my mind unbuttons your busy shirt and lets it open
you just whisper damn you sounds but wear my eyes
on the experience of your breasts that have fed before
but have not known the seclusion of my devouring

it is often that you would be beside me, you whisper
and behind me too if you were looking another way
so you could tell me of the view from you there
and could hear of mine from this side of your skin
then we would choose where to make love sounds

there are moments when you are fragile sided as woman
and you try to block those whispers from the wind
lest I know you are perfectly shaped to fit within
where the empty of me is decorated with nothing
so we could be crowds of another kind there

do you wonder of the extra of your heathen healing?
how much of her has spilled before this now
and how much is left to be an ocean rising
do waves from opposite seas become one tide
do they rise and fall and bend into the same sand

could you always separate a sigh from a whisper

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daark

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2011-10-16 01:22 PM

Dang!, Dark
You take me to those secret places where I want to be, but don't often visit.

And I always enjoy the trip with you.

Your single line endings are always very effective.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-10-16 03:05 PM

Thanks iceman

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2011-10-16 03:11 PM

DS...Hi there...I do enjoy your warm words. I especially liked:

where the empty of me is decorated with nothing
so we could be crowds of another kind there

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-10-16 03:19 PM

Special neighbor, thanks for your eyes.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2011-10-16 08:15 PM

it is often that you would be beside me, you whisper
and behind me too if you were looking another way
so you could tell me of the view from you there
and could hear of mine from this side of your skin

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You make it hard to resist.

Love those lines~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2011-10-17 05:42 AM

Babyblue. Thanks babe, you make it hard too. Um to resist I mean.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2011-10-17 08:59 AM

there are moments when you are fragile sided as woman
and you try to block those whispers from the wind
lest I know you are perfectly shaped to fit within
where the empty of me is decorated with nothing
so we could be crowds of another kind there

Your whispers leave me sighing. *S*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2011-10-17 10:10 AM

Ms suthern, and your sighs make me whisper. Thanks babe

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