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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2011-10-16 01:02 AM


Hearts / Together or Apart

Suzie if I was weak
I would say that
you ruined my life
because after I met you
I fell for you fast,
falling deeper and deeper
into you, to the place
where I wanted our
relationship to last,
unfortunately for me and
the fulfillment of my dreams
you are unavailable
it seems, for this
reason or that reason
I do not truly know,
still, in my heart
I want you to desire me
as much as I desire you.
For now, I shall hope and pray
that our desires will continue to
grow even when we're apart,
and love, dear love you may
continue to grow in our hearts
whether we're together or apart.

JamesLee
15October
2011

  

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2011-10-16 06:58 PM


James....

did some one's light
really capture your heart?

I hope so....

You deserve love.


JL
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2 posted 2011-10-16 08:33 PM


"still, in my heart
I want you to desire me
as much as I desire you.
For now, I shall hope and pray
that our desires will continue to
grow even when we're apart,"

Nice James, very nice.

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

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3 posted 2011-10-17 09:09 AM


unfortunately for me and
the fulfillment of my dreams
you are unavailable

Bittersweet though these times might be, you've written the hope that's in your heart beautifully... I hope for you. *S*

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