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Open Poetry #47

Dream Within My Reach

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-10-15 11:15 AM

When a dream
is dangled
just within my reach
Don't let my hopes
get too high
For I'm too quick
to believe
I could have that
piece of pie
Only to have it
half eaten
and find out
it wasn't mine

LGR(C)10/15/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-15 11:28 AM

It is yours if you want it bad enough and work toward that goal. I have faith in you, Lori.

~* The man who never alters his opinion is like standing water, and breeds reptiles of the mind.--William Blake ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-10-15 12:04 PM

Work can be play when you love it...
Hugs my friend.

Lori

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2011-10-15 01:12 PM

Ohhhh.... I hate when that happens!!

Nice write Lori.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

4 posted 2011-10-15 01:51 PM

Thanks JL glad you could relate!

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2011-10-15 07:42 PM

hahahhaha oh my gosh how you make my heart laugh so lol

listen Lori, just grab the damn thing and eat it lol

life's too short, and not taking chances just makes it shorter..

in fact, give me a big ol slice of that boston dream pie too

if it dont have anyone's name on it, then im going to take the biggest piece i can fit into my mouth..

I'm good that way.. you're welcome lol

fantastic as always

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2011-10-15 07:57 PM

Thank you, oh most admirable and ambitious one! You wear it well...the dream pie...you got a little on you.

Lori

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

7 posted 2011-10-15 10:13 PM

hahahaha.. you really are adorable lol

thanks for dessert, it was yum!

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