Open Poetry #47 |
The Show |
always4real Junior Member
since 2011-01-22
Posts 31A yankee that lives in NC |
Are you ready? Put on your best dress Fix your face Hide the truth Smile and say your fine Everyone should know But no one does The devil is true Bought and paid The show must go on... "Happiness is a state of your own mind!" |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Sad but true. Thought provoking first post. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!" |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
welcome...very interesting first offering...enjoyed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rachel, this sounds like a sad but true tale. One of the realities of poetry? Is that we never know if some writings are fact, or fiction. Sorry to say, yours sounds real enough. So that makes for good writing, especially if it is fiction. Welcome to Passions! Please check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Taking fraudulence into the glaring sun of truth and meaning. Happens each and every day. Welcome. ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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always4real Junior Member
since 2011-01-22
Posts 31A yankee that lives in NC |
Thank you for all the replies....unfortunately it is based on truth. Sunshine thank you so much for the special email "Happiness is a state of your own mind!" |
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amk377 Member
since 2009-08-11
Posts 58South Carolina |
Rachel, This speaks volumes! Your ability to so easily put your emotions into words come across effortlessly. I am in awe of how strong you are both emotionally as well as spiritually. Amy "we have but a moment...only one moment" |
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