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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-10-14 06:07 PM


rainy, dreary day
raven sits on the mantle
rain drips, poet writes

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-10-14 07:54 PM


quite insane over the lost Lenore...

Good one!
Lori

martiniat8
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2 posted 2011-10-14 08:03 PM


Hey Jerry,
   You really grabbed my attention with this one. You said much and left much more to be said... nice!

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2011-10-14 08:12 PM


Quite, Lori, quite. Thanks for being here.

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Thank you, martiniat8, I appreciate the comments.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

Krawdad
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4 posted 2011-10-14 09:01 PM


thanks for the smile
JerryPat2
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5 posted 2011-10-14 09:29 PM


You're welcome, Krawdad, thank you for being here.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

JL
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6 posted 2011-10-14 10:14 PM


Now I think Poe would really appreciate this one, Jerry.
I wonder how he came to use a raven in his writing.


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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7 posted 2011-10-14 10:18 PM


Who knows, JL, except for centuries the raven has had a bad reputation for doom and gloom. Thanks for chiming here here.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

jwesley
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8 posted 2011-10-14 10:20 PM


Turn the tables, my friend...ravens are pretty smart birds ... have him doing the writing and you the (dripping) dictation!!

good one,

j.

JerryPat2
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9 posted 2011-10-14 10:23 PM


Haha! Great idea, jwesley, and you are correct, the raven and/or blackbird, both are intelligent devils.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

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