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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
It’s been silent all these years Where the cupboards use to wake every Sunday They now sit in silence Waiting for my hand to touch their chapped wooden hearts It’s still a part of me For I rose through what I could see the heart shaped face under a light, grey sea A silence that bears a liking to the bridges That sit to the far east of where I use to reserve my thoughts Like the tiniest cracks of the walls in my home It’s been too long all these years All the pent up fears The silence never seemed so near It never seemed quite right The way a man can lose his thoughts Just for a second, those splitting years But this is the way we are To fight for the long year To have the silence by our side All these years. [This message has been edited by Tomer (10-14-2011 12:57 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The dynamics of our lives are intriguing and something that seems to change while remaining the same. Nice to ponder to your thoughts~ |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Very nicely done... and I see you have conjured, for when I read "silence" in that second-to-last line it comes through as "message"...  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"A silence that bears a liking to the bridges That sit to the far east of where I use to reserve my thoughts Like the tiniest cracks of the walls in my home" Very intriguing. This verse especially. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Blues, I couldn't have said it any better. Thanks for commenting. Take care Cheers Tomer |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Easy, nice observation  Happy you enjoyed Cheers Tomer |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
JL Happy you enjoyed the verse...hope all is well Cheers |
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