Open Poetry #47 |
Fall |
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Fall leaves fall down They touch the ground And make a mound ~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I wanted to respond with something witty in rhyme but it's too early I'm having trouble just typing my friend so I'll just say Good Morning to you, enjoyed your Haiku! Lori |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And Margherita wants to dance upon that mound and launch those leaves once again into the air for a last wild whirly pleasure before ... before the silence catches them. Inspiring, Jerry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
It is okay about the witty rhyme, Lori, I'm poking around with one finger on the keyboard and still making mistakes and having to go back and change them. Thank you for being here. <><><> Margherita , you go ahead and take a long, running jump and said through the air, landing my my neatly piled leave and scatter them will-nilly, my rake is ready for the task of piling them up again. Appreciate the kind words. |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
i love to dance and run through the mounds with out without shoes |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! You can join Margherita, as she does her thing EmmaRose. Thank you for being here among the fallen leaves. ~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I kind of agree with EmmaRose, except I watch as others pile up leaves and run through them. Enjoyed your "Fall" in review. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yep, we all have our thoughts about the fallen leaf, JL, and thank you for yours, and for being here to share them. ~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~ |
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