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The blazing meteor ... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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* my heart wings unfurl to soar right into the glorious break of dawn almost imperceptibly moving the air yet subtle vibrations make you alert for just a fleeting thought in dreams you evoke the sound of our soul song a meteor blazing through the night sky a split second not to be prolonged yet carved in luminous letters upon the canvas of our heart-memories a gasp of awe released to the ether with closed eyes open to love eternal * |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I love the way you find the love in everything and express it with celebration Lori |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Lovely thoughts and much talent to put them together in a poem of such grace. ~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"a meteor blazing through the night sky a split second not to be prolonged" Here is the pivotal point in the poem..this point expands the physical structure of the shooting star particles, into the invisible vapor of human emotion in order to give outline to the carving of readable memories on the stone (heart) of the soul... "carved in luminous letters upon the canvas of our heart-memories and then: "a gasp of awe released to the ether with closed eyes open to love eternal It is that "ether" that opens, instead of closes the eyes of "love eternal" Allowing growth of that emotion to grow by extrpolation. That is how I felt when I read this poem..the feeling was very good...:-) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
a gasp of awe released to the ether with closed eyes open to love eternal Your words breathed pure beauty into my hectic day... thank you! *S* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"yet carved in luminous letters upon the canvas of our heart-memories" Ah.... what a beauty. Love the picture and the write. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
quote: It doesn't last long, but oh what an image it invokes. That pretty much sums up life, doesn't it? Lets make that split second count. Beautifully done. Michael |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dearest Dolphina, your poetry soars as do your heart and spirit!  You're amazing! Your writing renders me speechless! With lots of love, Your cosmic sister, AT |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, you do make the sky blaze with fire...enjoyed this ms |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
like the comet in the sky.. your words too sparkle true across the backdrop of dreams.. Wuv this sweet friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Celebrating life in all of its hues, yes, dear Lori, therein lies the secret of serenity. Thank you for your loving comment. That you found grace in this, dear Jerry, pleases me much. Thank you! Dear Ford, thank you for your extraordinary comment. I love how you interpreted my words and reported your feelings to me. Precious attention really! Dear Ruth, it brings equal joy to me to know that you liked what you read here. Thank you so much. Thank you, dear JL, for the "ah ..." which is always a sign of connection to what we perceive in a write. Dear Michael, thank you so much for your loving comment. Yes, let's make that split second count! It affects us more than we imagine ... My cosmic sister, Linda Angelo Terrestre, do you realize what a special joy it is to have you here among us and leaving such a heartwarming comment here?! Thank you from the bottom of my heart, you do me good!  Dear DS, thank you so much for your presence on this thread. On the sky we write our greatest dreams and visions, yes! Dear Richy, I much enjoyed your sweet comment. Thank you! I love your expression "backdrop of dreams"! Love to all. Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Beautiful words and picture, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
great closing lines in particular! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a lovely flash of a poem Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You are beautiful and so is your poetry. xoxoxo A |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello margherita, reading your poem, i felt like an angel, words are so high and exquisite, thanks a lot yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Margherita, as you very well know, not just "seize the day" but "seize the moment" is one of the special keys to exhilaration and joy in love - not only of a partner, but also of every aspect of life! Very beautifully Margherita-expressed here and a joy to read (as always)! Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What magick in a falling star and in your words, Margherita. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Always a delight- You never ever fail to mesh both picture and words together. They always twine in such an elegant melody of words and image. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dear Margherita... your beautiful words always bring me smiles... :-) Hugs of love to you RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all one by one, my dear Poet friends, I was very happy to discover your loving comments on my return after a short interval. Love, Margherita |
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