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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2011-10-11 07:39 AM

listen to the warm
the sun is touching from behind
it is a place you don't go often
but we are there
beside ourselves
in the busy of it all
and our eyes touch eyes
knowing what that look is

they are as rattling of stones
rolling around in confusion
we are statues with our mouths
just touching a kiss from both sides
and your tongue tip is shy pretending
mine is pretending to be bold
but it speaks of wanting
instead of bathing within your smile

the occurring happens then
and we are in a meadow of green
where the flowers wag tails like puppies
wanting to be loved
there is nothing between us there
but one heart in common
secret place warm, safe place comfortable
there is liquid in our lingering

and I ask if you would return here often

_______________

daark

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-10-11 08:36 AM

quote:
and we are in a meadow of green
where the flowers wag tails like puppies
wanting to be loved
there is nothing between us there
but one heart in common

You show us a beautiful place where love blooms lusciously.

A perfect sigh poem!

M

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2011-10-11 09:07 AM

ms mar, thank you sweet lady

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2011-10-11 10:11 PM

listen to the warm
the sun is touching from behind
it is a place you don't go often
but we are there
beside ourselves
in the busy of it all
and our eyes touch eyes
knowing what that look is

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'm picturing that!! Dude, you are more hot than warm, but if you say so!!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2011-10-12 07:48 AM

babyblue...thanks sexy eyes...I appreciate you

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2011-10-12 07:53 AM

I so enjoy
when you touch McKuen's sleeve
and say,
let's meld a poem
and make her smile.

Because I do.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2011-10-12 08:06 AM

sweetsun...I was wondering if you would slip into this one...thanks babe

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2011-10-12 01:32 PM

I'm not surprised Sunshine beat me to this one... or that her thoughts were on the same page as mine. *S* That first line gets the attention of any McKuen fan! *S*

But you keep the attention... I can't imagine the answer being anything but yes... enthusiastically. *S*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2011-10-12 01:56 PM

Ms suthern, you bless me and make him wrinkle his nose. Thanks lady

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