Breathtaking Sunrise (Haiku)

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Open Poetry #47

Breathtaking Sunrise (Haiku)

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-10-10 07:25 PM

Breathtaking sunrise
Does anyone else feel it?
People rush to work

LGR(C)10/10/11

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2011-10-10 07:30 PM

I'd venture to say not too many felt it with you. The hustle and bustle of this world gets to me at times... mostly times just like you captured here.

Well done.

Michael

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2011-10-10 07:37 PM

Wonderful way to start the new day with a radiant sunrise.

~*~ Tell me whom you love, and I will tell you who you are.--Houssaye ~*~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2011-10-10 07:50 PM

the only trouble with sunrise is you have to be awake to see it, and many, even with their eyes open, coffee and steering wheel in hand...still aren't awake, still miss it....

enjoyed the thoughts here...

j.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2011-10-11 08:31 AM

I do, I do! Even though I rarely see it, because I sleep longer. But when I am awake at that hour, I feel all of its pure glory.

Thank you for this beauty.

M

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2011-10-11 01:24 PM

Great write! Sunrise on a cool morning with a cup of hot coffee in hand. Gotta love-it!

JL

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