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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2011-10-10 09:02 AM


we sip our spending in our secret place grottoes
you say it is okay to keep love and desire together
in the same bucket where we carry our minds

and that my armor is too big for you with clothing
but nude you can wear it loosely over your breasts
and that your nipples love the texture of my metal

there is music in our meadow of dream grass trees
you say it makes your woman skin wet there too
and do I mind wearing you afterward while dancing

your glass is fragile as feather width with wind sounds
but my breaking is a gentle kiss edging your pleasure
and then mending with those heart shaped shingles

you ascend your ladder of more while asking for rain


______________

daark



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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-10-11 03:15 AM


Yes, it is quite warm in this valley of yours ...

This is an ingenious thought, beautifully expressed:

you say it is okay to keep love and desire together
in the same bucket where we carry our minds


The ideal blend indeed!

M

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2011-10-11 06:27 AM


ms Mar..thank you lady friend, you bless me
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3 posted 2011-10-12 11:10 AM


you say it is okay to keep love and desire together
in the same bucket where we carry our minds

But then the bucket overflows and we lose our minds. *G*

Enjoyed this, Mr. D! *S*

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2011-10-12 12:03 PM


ms suthern..

OSHA and the FDA require that "wanna buckets" be of stretchable fabric and come equipped with full hazmat spill containment accessories.  However, I have not seen these buckets fully tested to the maximum so if you have a few hours to do some research?

thanks lady!!

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