Open Poetry #47 |
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The Surface |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY ![]() |
![]() and I was torn between the land and the unknown world we call the ocean both hold such beauty sustaining life within and I lingered where both worlds were parallel the ocean offering such a gentle cultivating cradle making me weightless welcoming me to the depths and the earth painted such a lovely canvas, with a rainbow of hues, bekoning me to venture But I was torn, between two worlds not really falling, and just barely floating and so I lingered there, at the surface. -Trina You better believe I could p!ss a Happy Meal off. |
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mikeandrew Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198 |
brilliant work enjoyed it very much. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Trina I loved the art and the words they are a perfect complement. Great stuff as per usual girl. Lori |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisite, Trina. Owl |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Thanx Mike! Thanx Lori, that picture is intriguing eh? Thanx Owl, that means alot to me. -Trina |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Great wordplay, Trina. ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
written with such eloquence and artistry...the words you selected match the picture perfectly...this really is brilliant ![]() There must be a poem in here somewhere. [This message has been edited by faithmairee (01-22-2011 10:14 PM).] |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
loved the words and the pic...you interwove them well...congrats |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Thanx Jerry! Thanx Faith! ![]() Congrats? lol Thanx Steavenr -Trina |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Unique, refreshing and different. Nice. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Very beautiful, the pic was wonderful with the poem. Enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Being a scuba diver I know these feelings...sometimes you get lost in the pleasure...James |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
s1nfully_1nn0c3nt - Poets often find themselves lingering between worlds just at the surface, between yesterday and tomorrow, between what is below and what is envisioned above. This was poignant. I much enjoyed. Namyh |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The surface, yep, you're so right. I think this is simply a wonderful insightful aspect of speculation. Great work Trina!! Eric oxymoron....Rap Music |
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