Open Poetry #47 |
love is...... |
karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
a song i wrote.... Knowing what I had Feeling really bad Lost it all that night Can no longer fight Life is different when you're all alone Got nothing to do but cry and play your song Strumming guitar strings Staring at my ring Recalling the past Love I thought would last Love is hard when you walk on a one way street And all you can hear is your own heartbeat Staring at my face Thinking of that place Playing our love song Where did we go wrong? Love is crazy when you're the only one Looking for something that's been gone Crying once again Wish it didn't end Wiping tears away Know I'll be okay Love is one extraordinary feeling One day I'll find my happy ending " u were never good enough for him or anything like me, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I really like this song. One of your best writes. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'll drink a couple of beers over this one. Play it again, Joe. ~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~ |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
HEHE, thanks JL, thanks jerry.. " u were never good enough for him or anything like me, |
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