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Open Poetry #47

If You Were Here

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-10-06 07:21 PM

If You Were Here

In Honolulu its
3:00 a.m in the morning
and I'm thinking
of you
and I know
in Chicago
you're thinking
of me too
because I sense
your sensations
and I can feel
your vibrations
and if you were here
I could taste your kiss
melting away my lips.

JamesLee
05October
2011

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-10-06 07:28 PM

The space between lovers isn't really that faraway so long as we keep them close at heart.

Nice James~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2011-10-07 11:31 AM

Perfect, James. Excellent write.
Maybe you should take a week off and go to Chicago...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2011-10-07 04:08 PM

... and with that sweet thought you drifted off to dreamland I imagine ...

Lovely, James.

M

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