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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2011-10-05 04:15 AM


So, the story turns a different direction
after a whirlwind of activity
some things stay the same
and some things move on

A decision to go to China
thwarted by 5 days of Prager separation anxiety
tears, tears, tears, and a chance to become legal,
a visa at last, ruined by a thief at the train station

High and Low
as the swing and song go
"I'm, just a Regular Joe"
I just go with the flow

Tak, as they say... So,
then a decision, t'wether to stay or go
back to America, a mother ill
and hospitalized

Search for work, yielded some
and much, helped by a decision to return to Church
then the search, for place to live
only hours away from a homeless skive

Answered an ad for a flat
She called me
its in the same building???
PERFECT, How about that!

A bit of a change in life direction
a decision to return to faith
joined a church, singing group of worship
dinner for eight, yields a pill popping Irish woman

a line and statement that doesn't fit

and 3 other women's interests.

Interested, Interested, Interesting
but alas, not me, uninterested
in them

a new personal ad on the internet
15 replies in one day
Interested, Interested Interested
but me in them? not really, none of them

and so the days go
with a diversified
English teacher's and writer's
portfolio.

and as for the women...

Eh, they come and go

a repeating cycle appears
my heart pounds for a few
the beautiful, the new
a new flatmate with Latvian sweetened perfume

and then there are the rest,
the young, the American, the spoken for,
the taken, all in all which I'm interested in
always a challenge, and I, the dauntless hopeful romantic

for me, hope and life, is at it's best.

© Copyright 2011 Kenneth Bradley Smith - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-10-05 07:09 AM


You sure packed a lot into this . . . er . . . travelogue-poem, martiniat8. Search, always search. Sometimes what we search for is close at hand, right under our noses, so to speak. Hopefully you will find what you are searching for.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 2011-10-05 01:29 PM


I love your depiction of America

quote:
a mother ill
and hospitalized


as well as the other images drawn to mind throughout this piece.

The fulfillment you express in the end is shared by the reader.

Enjoyable read.


Michael



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