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Open Poetry #47

Missing you and it hurts

twistedpup
Member

since 2011-02-25

Posts 115

0 posted 2011-10-03 02:23 AM

Standing alone in this room.
Darknes around me
screaming your name!
Save me from my self.
Im going cazy waiting
Be my hero.
Save me before the clock strikes midnight
I dont want to be alone another night
Longing for your arms to hold me and not let go
Aching for you to save me
You're all I dream about
Your face is all I see when my eyes close
I dont wanna sleep unless i hear your voice before I do.
Needing you more then you know
The pillow catches the tears you dont see
Wanting you here next to me
Wishing our time together would be everlasting
never ending
Cant stand being here alone
Every one pushing us apart
Fighting for what we beleive
I didnt know i could feel hurt like this
Your arms are what i miss
Holding my breath till i see you so i can breathe again.

*hugs*

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2011-10-03 02:49 PM

I didnt know i could feel hurt like this
Your arms are what i miss
Holding my breath till i see you so i can breathe again.

You've written the desolation and frustration well!

karren29
Member

since 2011-09-29

Posts 85
philippines

2 posted 2011-10-03 04:27 PM

"Holding my breath till i see you so i can breathe again."

ive felt like this for so long..

"i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2011-10-04 08:07 PM

"The pillow catches the tears you dont see
Wanting you here next to me
Wishing our time together would be everlasting
never ending"

Very nicely expressed emotional plea.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

twistedpup
Member

since 2011-02-25

Posts 115

4 posted 2011-10-08 01:15 AM

thank you all so much for your feedback. i dont write often but when i do it goes in spurts. like i will write for a while and stop. then start weeks or months down the road. any way thanks agian.

sincerly,tess

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