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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2011-10-02 06:58 PM



I goaded myself on a bellyful
of ignorance and attitude
then hurled my patience and gratitude

My finger pointed
just and true....
...how does that go?
“One at them
Three back at you”...

My indignation felt so good
for a change
from poor me fodder
The nerve of some people
giving me respite
from my own

From higher learning
I still remember
we each unto another
a purpose serve
by learning
or to teach
And in truth
it takes us each
within our skin
And what irks me
about another
is a surly something
irksome in me

So what's my problem
and my indignation
dissolves into inquisition
and I'm back to battling
my own demons again

But still, in that stirring
from my stupor by
that oh so sort of stupid
only known to humanity
that puts a fire under me,
I am alive!
Championing the underdog!
My anger is condoned
my flame becoming
but benign

LGR(C)10/2/11


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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2011-10-02 07:06 PM



From higher learning
I still remember
we each unto another
a purpose serve
by learning
or to teach
And in truth
it takes us each
within our skin
And what irks me
about another
is a surly something
irksome in me
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Thank you very much for that!!  Love those thoughts.


JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-10-02 08:11 PM


WoW! Some inspiring homespun philosophy in this great piece of writing, Lori. From the depths of your soul you have reached in and declared to the world certain pieces of yourself you want told. Your words are to be valued for what they are . . . Your humanity on parade. I absolutely loved this.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2011-10-02 10:16 PM


Blues, thanks for finding something worthwhile
_______________________________________

Jerry, wow! for the really kind words. They mean alot.

flash
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since 2010-11-28
Posts 213
miami beach, florida
4 posted 2011-10-03 07:53 AM


Yes, Lori: the fluid-moving fire begins and ends with you..I like the innocuous benign ending.

Soulful read,

Al

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2011-10-03 08:14 AM


Thanks Al glad you picked up on that benign part.
Lori

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2011-10-03 08:29 AM


I'm glad Al picked up on it also. I failed to mention it.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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7 posted 2011-10-03 11:26 AM


A profound truth very well expressed!

Margherita

Michael
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8 posted 2011-10-03 05:08 PM


Your delving into that deeper side of you again, Lori.     As I said before, I like this side of you.

quote:
Championing the underdog!
My anger is condoned  


Intriguing thought.  Enjoyed the read.


Michael

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
9 posted 2011-10-04 08:01 PM


"I am alive!
Championing the underdog!
My anger is condoned
my flame becoming
but benign"

Passive aggressive, with such passion.

I really enjoyed this.
JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

ice
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since 2003-05-17
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Pennsylvania
10 posted 2011-10-07 07:24 AM


Excellent!
Too short of a reply, but I am walking out the door in 1 minute.

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