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karren29
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0 posted 2011-09-29 06:53 PM



She laughs when you make mistakes,
And cries when you ache.
She tells you silly things,
And loves it when you sing..

So weird and funny but its true
She could make you smile when you're blue.
No matter what people say or do,
She'll always stand beside you

But the sad part is,
You never noticed all of these.
You took her for granted, yes you did
Thought it was ok for she was easy to please.

No chocolates, not even roses
No special dates, never gone to places
But it's ok for it didn't matter
Coz you promised to hold her forever.

Sweet words left unspoken,
Romantic moments never happened.
But though you never did what's in her dream,
Holding her hand had always been a perfect scene.

I laugh when you make mistakes
And cry when you ache.
I tell you silly things
I love it when you sing.

So weird and funny but it's true
I've fallen so deeply in love with you
And no matter what people say or do
I'll be here forever loving you.

Simple gestures of love give me shiver
It's like a promise of love forever
And though were not perfect I wont ask for more
Coz you're the only one I've ever dreamt for!!

© Copyright 2011 karren vianca crisostomo - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2011-09-29 07:53 PM


Enjoyed your thoughts on true love...James
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2011-09-29 08:17 PM


Happens every day. Men are beasts.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

karren29
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3 posted 2011-09-29 10:32 PM


thanks for the comment james, and jerry, hehe thanks for reading and commenting


suthern
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4 posted 2011-09-30 10:56 PM


Simple gestures of love give me shiver

Give me simple gestures anytime... they're more likely to last! Welcome to Passions!

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
5 posted 2011-09-30 11:00 PM


Simple is what makes it beautiful, and true -
the rest can be wonderful, yet meaningless; simple, comes from the heart.

j.

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
6 posted 2011-09-30 11:02 PM


I think suthern quoted it best.
Enjoyed...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

karren29
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7 posted 2011-10-01 02:48 AM


thanks, you guys, im glad you liked it
karren29
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8 posted 2011-10-01 03:09 AM


thanks guys, im glad you liked it


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