Open Poetry #47 |
what true love is... |
karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
She laughs when you make mistakes, And cries when you ache. She tells you silly things, And loves it when you sing.. So weird and funny but its true She could make you smile when you're blue. No matter what people say or do, She'll always stand beside you But the sad part is, You never noticed all of these. You took her for granted, yes you did Thought it was ok for she was easy to please. No chocolates, not even roses No special dates, never gone to places But it's ok for it didn't matter Coz you promised to hold her forever. Sweet words left unspoken, Romantic moments never happened. But though you never did what's in her dream, Holding her hand had always been a perfect scene. I laugh when you make mistakes And cry when you ache. I tell you silly things I love it when you sing. So weird and funny but it's true I've fallen so deeply in love with you And no matter what people say or do I'll be here forever loving you. Simple gestures of love give me shiver It's like a promise of love forever And though were not perfect I wont ask for more Coz you're the only one I've ever dreamt for!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts on true love...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Happens every day. Men are beasts. ~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~ |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
thanks for the comment james, and jerry, hehe thanks for reading and commenting |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Simple gestures of love give me shiver Give me simple gestures anytime... they're more likely to last! Welcome to Passions! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Simple is what makes it beautiful, and true - the rest can be wonderful, yet meaningless; simple, comes from the heart. j. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I think suthern quoted it best. Enjoyed... JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
thanks, you guys, im glad you liked it |
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karren29 Member
since 2011-09-29
Posts 85philippines |
thanks guys, im glad you liked it |
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