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Open Poetry #47

Haunted by You

ChemicalRepose
Member

since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

0 posted 2011-09-29 09:43 AM

The first time I saw her
the sun shined
as I caught a glimpse
of the sparkle in her eyes.
Every word I spoke touched her soul,
as if the words existed only for her.
We were two halves
that made a whole.

The sun faded like watching a ship from shore
as dusk approached
we both knew
this energy was no more.

It was dark and sad
as we turned our backs.
Tears swelling in our eyes,
inevitably the floodgates opened
and years of love
began flowing freely.
Sobbing hysterically,
I had to push you away,
and leave you to your own misery.
Not a day goes by
without your memory haunting me.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2011-09-29 03:51 PM

Beautifully rendered. I can relate in many ways.

Michael

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-09-30 07:12 AM

Poignant, dear Ben!

M

ChemicalRepose
Member

since 2004-03-28

Posts 102

3 posted 2011-09-30 08:34 AM

Yes, very much so!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2011-09-30 11:00 AM

Oh goodness the angst of it all....Love hurts!
Well done and welcome to the blue sea~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2011-09-30 11:34 PM

Achingly beautiful!

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