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Open Poetry #47

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-09-27 04:10 PM

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Was it you
That just passed
In the diaphanous thought
Of cornflower blue

Or the golden leaves
Falling one by one
On the old wooden bridge
Were they perhaps
The shades of your hair

When I heard what I took
To be a sparrow’s little song
Sensed a scent of perfume
In the autumn air

Was it you
Was it really you

Ah Brave Old Man
Who lights my way
In the waking world
Let me walk in my dreams

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2011-09-27 08:09 PM

I felt the surrealness of this, and the feeling of being caught up in a dream.

So very nice~

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

2 posted 2011-09-27 10:54 PM

Touching and beautiful

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2011-09-27 10:59 PM

beautiful

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2011-09-28 02:34 AM

Another beautiful painting of your mind and your surroundings.

Owl

shelerellaSP
Junior Member

since 2011-08-12

Posts 42

5 posted 2011-09-28 02:36 AM

this one brought tears to my eyes... lovely!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2011-09-28 03:10 AM

A lovely, haunting beauty, John. One of your very best.
Ida

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