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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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TREASURE TROVE 27 September 2011 You know the soul of my todays and my yesterdays and my tomorrows with your heart’s palette in colours beyond the rainbow and you soothe my fears with your caressing eyes and your seeing hands as you stroke my hair as we worship together the fireglow of love’s bounty. Owl [This message has been edited by OwlSA (09-27-2011 12:42 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
as we worship together the fireglow of love’s bounty. A blessed state to be in, dear Owl, you say it most beautifully! Love, Margherita |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautifully written, owl. Left me sighing. Michael |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Yes, it is a wonderful state to be in, Margherita. Thank you, for finding it beautiful. Smiles. Thank you, Michael. It can happen to you again. Really. Owl |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Reading this feels like being wrapped in soft fleece. There's a lightness to your writing that is very lovely. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
The portrait is perfect as you describe it. A masterpiece as it were. ~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Nicole, for such a beautiful reply. Thank you, Jerry for your lovely words. Wow, a masterpiece? Thanks again! Owl |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"the fireglow of love’s bounty" Love it. The poem is like the seasons, with a beautiful autumn evening at the end. I picture two lovers, under a burnt orange moon, on a warm October night.. Harvesting the crop of love. Don't mind me, my mind wonders around a lot. [This message has been edited by ice (09-28-2011 11:50 AM).] |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ford, for your lovely reply. That is a beautiful picture you paint. Giggles at the "Don't mind me!" Owl |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Such a tender lullaby, Owl! So beautiful. Best, Amaryllis |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Is there anyone who doesn't like the glow of a fire - metaphorically or a small friendly one, of course? |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I don't know about the lullaby part, Amaryllis, but thanks for thinking it's beautiful. Smiles. Thank you, Krawdad. Owl |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Lady Owl...it is a pleasure to watch this evolve |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Dark. I am glad it is. Smiles. Owl |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Beautifully romantic, Diana. Ida |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
this elicits a smile from these lips that are too often frowning.......thank you sweet lady |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ida. Smiles. Thank you, luminosity. I am so happy to hear it. I love making people smile, especially if they don't do so often. Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Finding such a one is indeed finding treasure. *S* Beautiful write! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Ruth. Yes it is. Smiles. Owl |
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