Open Poetry #47 |
language of butterflies |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
quixote woman of the dawning of sighs do you ride your magic carpet there where the tree people are voices in wind and the birds make songs with their wings do you kneel on sand castle pillows then and pray prayers that rhyme in your mind like the heartbeats of lovers blending souls and is your god within the folding of your hands are there windows without glass in walls that never listen when you tell secrets and doors that have openings to find those dark things you hid in the mid light and do you know the language of the butterfly __________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sigh! You have put your heart into this, dear D.! The beauty of this will create echoes like thunder within the heart of the quixote woman and she will transform into a butterfly and fly and fly ... to land upon your shoulder and touch your soul. Magnificent. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you sweet lady... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I found a dying luna moth Saturday... I couldn't save him, but protected him from the ants while fragile life slipped away. Reading this poem was like holding that kind of beauty in my hand... a privilege. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Suthern, your gentle is pretty kiss colors. Thank you babe |
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shelerellaSP Junior Member
since 2011-08-12
Posts 42 |
enchanting! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms shel' thank you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That must be me... I'm always upside down... lovely, D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sweetsun...oh you are such a tease...thanks babe |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
The language of butterflies, I imagine, is soft, veiled, distant ... sotto voce... ms. e |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms e, so I have been told, it has a stirring effect on one. Thanks ms |
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