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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2011-09-25 08:19 AM


The woman had blackberry lips
They beckoned to him with a fire-hot tongue
Lifting breasts from the bodice so low
Weighing each with her hands
My mouth is all yours now; my deepness you'll have soon
Conscience be damned amid pleasing breasts
With hands outstretched he did reach out
Pleasing mounds, small or gigantic
A balm to old men and infants alike
Woman! Oh, magnificent woman
To disrobe her and behold all of her charms
Causes man to quite lose himself
To suckle and fondle what often makes him
Blind to the world. Nay! Even to the heavens
Around him. Throughout time immortal
Woman so skilled in the sensuous arts
When she wraps man into her persuasive arms
Pulling him into her breasts with his biting ways
The bed creaking and protesting the lustful surge
It began in the very late afternoon
The two were one whichever position they might take
It became quite clear as he plowed fertile flesh
There'd be no subduing the earthen mother he had found
Though with all his testosterone-laced manhood
He endeavored to give more than he did take
Bellowing like a wounded bull, it was midnight when he quit
After all he given her was delivered to avec plaisir
She hooted a wicked hoot, sat up in the bed and said
Send in the replacements!

©September 19, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton



~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

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Margherita
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1 posted 2011-09-25 09:50 AM


Replacements? What replacements?

It's quite hot in here, dear Jerry, and you have been quite explicit. I get it you have given and taken  avec plaisir, but this woman was showing you in the end her venality.

No doubt about her conquering you with her art of sensuousness. If all women learned this art there wouldn't be so many cases of infidelity!


M

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2011-09-25 10:04 AM


Yes, indeed, Margherita. There would be no energy left, huh?

Thank you for being here, I always look forward to your comments.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2011-09-25 12:16 PM


Yikes! hot stuff!!! Man! What a B---h! Call those maneaters don't they? Knocked my socks off with your eroticism.
Lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2011-09-25 12:55 PM


Hah! Easy there, Lori. Thanks for the read and the HOT response. Heh.Heh.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

Michael
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5 posted 2011-09-25 02:56 PM


rofl...  great ending JP.

Got me singing "I can't get no satisfaction" in my head now.

That's a good thing, I suppose.  



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6 posted 2011-09-25 03:32 PM


LOL... I'm betting all thoughts of exhaustion flew right out the window! *G*
JerryPat2
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7 posted 2011-09-25 03:37 PM


That's not a bad thought, Michael. Appreciate you being here.

Haha! I bet you would be right, suthern. Heh.Heh. Thanks for stopping by.

~~ Those who are silent are the first to be shot. ~~

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