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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2011-09-23 11:15 PM



Ms. Jones on Steroids

A hand on her hip
big juicy lips
He wants to
kiss and make up
and he will
if she will
put down that
rolling pin.

JamesLee
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Angel4aKing
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1 posted 2011-09-24 02:39 AM


LOL cute....have rolling pin will not back down!!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Margherita
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2 posted 2011-09-24 07:02 AM


Had to look up "rolling pin" and now that I know what it is I remember many humoristic vignettes in German where the wife threatens her husband with it.

Your Ms. Jones is well characterized!

Smiles.

M


OwlSA
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3 posted 2011-09-24 07:36 AM


Giggles, James.  It's hilarious - my favourite line is "she will" and its presumed connection with the previous line, but actual connection with the next - I thought that was brilliant!

Owl

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4 posted 2011-09-24 09:47 PM


LOL... Yammean she's not making pie for dessert? *bratty grin*
JL
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5 posted 2011-09-25 05:39 AM


LOL... James, at least it's not a cast iron skillet.

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

[This message has been edited by JL (09-25-2011 11:24 AM).]

ebonygirl
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6 posted 2011-09-25 03:32 PM


I liked this rolling pin compromise, ms. e
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