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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2011-09-23 11:33 AM

Picture me in your mind
poses of your own design
Let me steal you away
picturing me this way
Let me be a distraction
your main attraction
that won’t let you
focus on what you do
until you see me again
dressed in my skin

LGR©9/23/11

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2011-09-23 01:12 PM

I'm picturing it, Lori, but the film seems to be fuzzy. Still, I persist in picturing it.

~~ War does not determine who is right, it determines who is left. ~~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-09-23 01:25 PM

clean your glasses

LOL
Lori

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2011-09-23 06:23 PM

Very nice Lori.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2011-09-23 11:19 PM

Nice...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2011-09-24 09:18 AM

Distraction may be dangerous, you better keep him safely within your arms.

Lovely and passionate thoughts, dear Lori.

M

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

6 posted 2011-09-24 07:57 PM

Enjoyed your poem, smiles, ms. e

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

7 posted 2011-09-25 09:11 AM

Oh my gawd this is wayyyy tooo sasssssyyyyy... I loved it haha

So nice to read you again Lori, a picture's worth a thousand words, this poem was worth, a thousand pictures...

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

8 posted 2011-09-25 02:57 PM

Ummm...

That's all... just ummm!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2011-09-27 08:17 PM

Your poetry has sex appeal, and a certain sultry, lacy kind of passion that is unsurpassed.

Lovely, Lori~

karren29
Member

since 2011-09-29

Posts 85
philippines

10 posted 2011-10-02 06:35 AM

this is very nice, i enjoyed it

"i wanna know how it feels to be over you for real, til i do, ill be writing POEMS about you"

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