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flash
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since 2010-11-28
Posts 213
miami beach, florida

0 posted 2011-09-23 05:17 AM


cyber-age argument:
his e-mail all in CAPS
hers in bold

school desk
the gum harder
than the textbooks

yearbook inscriptions
I will love you always
and other fairy tales

biology class--
he takes notes
on her anatomy

please hold. . .
your call is very important--
please hold. . .



*if my call is so darn important, why the H---
does the robot leave me on hold for over 30 minutes!!!


--Al

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JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2011-09-23 05:24 AM


LOL.
This is so true to life.
Enjoyed your humor, Flash.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2011-09-23 07:01 AM


Giggles, Al.  You brought another smile to my day.

Owl

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Posts 20723
Louisiana
3 posted 2011-09-23 02:48 PM


I laughed at the first one so much I almost forgot to read the others... Enjoyed! *S*
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