Open Poetry #47 |
dare to imagine |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I heard your laughter when it was running down from mountain sides of dream scape terrain you, sultry dawn with your dampened whispers and that, the residue of your daring spend to let the many men of me find your woman songs and then you were noon time tomorrow again out of my reach but still the limbs of trees that made my mind climb between more often searching for the scented leaves you left behind that I might be adorned within your nudity evening arrived more quickly than suggested and you were only then ready, for dancing but said you might return again later on if I gave you all my dream demons as flowers so you could handle their petals with your eyes and only imagine the pricking of their stems ___________ daark |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
evening arrived more quickly than suggested and you were only then ready, for dancing but said you might return again later on Your imagination turns the most mundane into magic! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Suthern, thanks lady friend |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
dream demon flowers, thinking this out, Enjoyed, Ms. E |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms E, thanks lady friend |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ingenious and delectable, dear D.! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Mar...thank you little lady friend |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ok I'm going to go with the first verse, because I love the terrain and the way your poetry flows. Have mercy dude, you've pulled up all the stops here...you make it easy to imagine! Seriously loving the beauty and surrounding sounds of this~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Babyblue, thanks for the smile lady friend |
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