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Open Poetry #47

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flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

0 posted 2011-09-20 06:48 AM

long after the Ball
Cinderella washing dishes
in Dr Scholl's slippers

nursing home
he waters the plastic flowers
they're growing!

wallflower
may I have this dance?
he asks the wall

bumper cars
this one's for the van
that cut me off!

patches and holes
from garden pruning—
trendy jeans

**far less expensive than the pre-manufactured ones!! Saw this in a recent fall designer jeans Catalogue:

Here is a sneak peak
at our trendy fall line of
DESTROYED JEANS.
Guaranteed 20 or more
rips, tears, holes & frays
front and back with paint
splotches throughout.
Wow! Only
$149

Finally (just in from Europe)
we are proud to present our
TOTAL DESTRUCTION
denim for the upcoming season
with HUGE rips, tears, holes, frays
and paint splatter everywhere!
Guaranteed to look like it's
been through a War Zone
after a losing battle
$499

--Al

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2011-09-20 06:56 AM

Nice humor Flash.
Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2011-09-20 07:44 AM

Thank you for the smiles, dear Al! They are all great!

And those jeans? What a crazy psychotic world is the designer's world. Holes and rips etc. become a work of art and their prices show it!

Much enjoyed.

Love,
Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2011-09-20 09:59 AM

I'm really enjoying your style...you are lot of fun but there is always that deeper thread. Write on.
Lori

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2011-09-20 10:56 AM

Enjoyed these!

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

5 posted 2011-09-20 01:09 PM

JL, Margherita, Lori, Suthern:

Glad these seem to be working its humorous intent, altho (as Lori points out) there may be some deeper underlying meanings to unravel under the iceberg.

Thanks ALL!

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