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Big Bang reflections (3 haiku)
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Big Bang reflections (3 haiku) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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* Cosmic expansion: aftermath of ecstasy when Love met matter * Act of creation: two atoms join together primal form of love * Divine core climax: endless reverberation pervades Universe * [This message has been edited by Margherita (09-16-2011 04:04 AM).] |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice write Margherita. Enjoyed your 3 senryu JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Wow, these were great! enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Dear Margherita, I don't have words to describe your poem, I can only feel the message vibrate thru my being, Loved it, Ms. E |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I think you're onto something here, Margherita. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear JL, thank you. I suddenly thought that these may well be haiku, the birth of Universe is the beginning of all NATURE after all... Sometimes it is difficult to establish. Thank you, dear Karen, for your loving comment! Dear Ebonygirl, it makes me happy that you felt these thoughts within. Thank you! You bring smiles, dear Ida! You got that right, your intuition certainly is aligned to mine! Thank you so much. Love, Margherita |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
Margherita: The bing primal bang? The beginning--which is still expanding and reverberating..reminds me of Basho's frog that jumped into the pond centuries ago--we're still feeling the effects: Basho's frog four hundred years of ripples and great poetry--like yours--will go on rippling in the mind and hearts of those willing to open up and expand. Al |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yes, yes, yes, amen! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. And beautiful in it's reflection and inspiration Margherita. You know that I am a fan of minimilism and you have paired this down to essential beauty. Love, Eric |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I'm in the senryu camp, but it really doesn't matter what they are called, my friend, the blurring has been successfully done over the years. All that really matters is that they convey messages as profound and as artistically as did you with these three goodies. ~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~ |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I like them all, but the first one best..:-) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Al, thank you for your most generous, loving and interesting comment. I love Basho's frog jump ripples! Thank you, dear Lori, for your approval of my own "big bang theories"  .My dear Eric, it always brings me joy when you come in here. I knew you would be perfectly aligned to the thoughts I expressed. Thank you for your loving comment. Always hoping you will soon come back with your refined outstanding poetry. Thank you so much, dear Jerry, for your thoughtful comment and the compliments. "goodies" is a lovely expression .Thank you, dear Ford, for coming in and enjoying my thoughts. The first was the starter indeed, but then I couldn't stop ... Love, Margherita |
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