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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2011-09-14 05:43 PM



Mr Sorrow

Another day goes by
and still I try.
Another day goes by
but still I cry.
Another day goes by
and still I wonder why
there are no gains
the pain inflames
the sadness remains
and Mr Sorrow claims
another broken heart.

JamesLee
13September
2011


  


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2011-09-14 07:30 PM


It will get better. Truly. It will.

~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~

theladypoet21
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since 2011-09-13
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Ohio, USA
2 posted 2011-09-14 07:45 PM


Aww.. I can relate, although I am a girl. Very moving and touching. I liked it a lot.

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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2011-09-14 09:11 PM


Tell that "Mr. Sorrow" to take a hike!
As my friend Cisco says:
"We don't need no stinking Mr. Sorrow!"

Enjoyed the write JamesLee.


JL



Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

[This message has been edited by JL (09-15-2011 05:32 AM).]

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4 posted 2011-09-17 10:01 PM


Well written sadness... Hugs to you!
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