Open Poetry #47 |
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Mr Sorrow |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Mr Sorrow Another day goes by and still I try. Another day goes by but still I cry. Another day goes by and still I wonder why there are no gains the pain inflames the sadness remains and Mr Sorrow claims another broken heart. JamesLee 13September 2011 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
It will get better. Truly. It will. ~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~ |
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theladypoet21 New Member
since 2011-09-13
Posts 8Ohio, USA |
Aww.. I can relate, although I am a girl. Very moving and touching. I liked it a lot. ![]() Check out my work at www.facebook.com/poemsfromtheheart |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Tell that "Mr. Sorrow" to take a hike! As my friend Cisco says: "We don't need no stinking Mr. Sorrow!" Enjoyed the write JamesLee. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! [This message has been edited by JL (09-15-2011 05:32 AM).] |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well written sadness... Hugs to you! |
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