Open Poetry #47 |
Mr Sorrow |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Mr Sorrow Another day goes by and still I try. Another day goes by but still I cry. Another day goes by and still I wonder why there are no gains the pain inflames the sadness remains and Mr Sorrow claims another broken heart. JamesLee 13September 2011 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
It will get better. Truly. It will. ~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~ |
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theladypoet21 New Member
since 2011-09-13
Posts 8Ohio, USA |
Aww.. I can relate, although I am a girl. Very moving and touching. I liked it a lot. Check out my work at www.facebook.com/poemsfromtheheart |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Tell that "Mr. Sorrow" to take a hike! As my friend Cisco says: "We don't need no stinking Mr. Sorrow!" Enjoyed the write JamesLee. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. Maranatha! [This message has been edited by JL (09-15-2011 05:32 AM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well written sadness... Hugs to you! |
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