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Open Poetry #47

strangers no more

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2011-09-12 05:09 PM

They were strangers
to themselves and each other

The streets seemed to notice all too well
the way he looked at his reflection
the way she peered down at her feet

Two spirits
souls above a glass filled wind
Her hair taunting his quiet grin

Simply in love with the unknown
of the long side of life
Of a long heart that screams ones name
Tonight, we shall see the joys of each other

For tomorrow, we are the envy of the sun
The rain that tames the gravel road
Here we come to sign our home
Strangers, no more

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2011-09-12 06:44 PM

I really like the way this ends with such a feeling of belonging. *S*

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2011-09-12 07:52 PM

I think you hit a home run with this one.
Really enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2011-09-13 12:40 PM

Suthern,

Happy you enjoyed..thanks for the comment.

Cheers

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2011-09-13 12:42 PM

JL-

Happy you think so...appreciate the support. Take care

Cheers

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

5 posted 2011-09-13 03:14 AM

Oh, Tomer, this is SO beautiful!

Owl

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

6 posted 2011-09-13 05:15 PM

Owl,

Appreciate the love..hope you're well

Cheers

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

7 posted 2011-09-14 11:39 PM

Nicely written, Tomer, Ms. E

flash
Member

since 2010-11-28

Posts 213
miami beach, florida

8 posted 2011-09-15 05:27 PM

Starting out as strangers and ending up as friends or lovers--wow--such a happy joyful ending. Hope it continues!

Thanks for sharing,

flash

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