Open Poetry #47 |
Beware (I rode a horse called Pathos) |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
* * * * * Consider both the messenger in equal parts to message, heed. * * * For he who grips the reigns of steed-- that "call-to-arms" alert might be a herald of sincerity done so because the rider bleeds upon the mount of Chivalry. A mighty horse, indeed. But yet? Intention paves infamously the path foreshadowing the streets stamped with the mark of Purity: "Beware this point for dragons be..." Fill-in-the-blanks, or just proceed. Consider options, as you read: This cautionary tale might be written with the very ink of bias, due to view, askewed, by knowledge of the weight of hoof; perhaps, in need of bandaging. * * * Consider both the messenger, in equal parts, to message, heed. * * * * * disclaimer: I don't believe this has anything to do with 9-11. But then again, How would I know? I'm a bit too close to the author to be objective. With hugs, and love, serenity * * * * * |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I will take heed, Enjoyed Serenity, Ms. E |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"This cautionary tale might be written with the very ink of bias, due to view, askewed, by knowledge of the weight of hoof; perhaps, in need of bandaging." Very expressive write but not sure about the horse called pity? Is the horse you rode to be pitted or your misplaced emotion a pity? Sorry for the question, but I'm old and slow, maybe you could explain? JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your poetry is, of course, heedful... and needful by all, whether they realize it or not. Good messages, my dear. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The horse's name that I rode was Pathos. Not pity. In retrospect, I kinda pity the Pathos tho. *chuckle* Thanks for reading. My love to all. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks for the clarification. I thought pathos meant pity. My bad! enjoyed. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am moved, as you speak of Pathos, with delicacy and knowledge. Bias is a very insidious risk, but our experiences no doubt form our way of thinking. Your eyes are clear, no bandage needed. Love, Margherita |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karen...Sounds like to me Plathos referring to you is tired and in need of a rest. A mother protecting her family comes to mind while reading the following. A mighty horse, indeed. But yet? Intention paves infamously the path foreshadowing the streets stamped with the mark of Purity: "Beware this point for dragons be..." I always enjoy reading you and trying to understand the meaning of your poetry. That is half the fun. Enjoyed as always...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-13-2011 01:27 PM).] |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this alot |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Intention paves infamously the path foreshadowing the streets stamped with the mark of Purity: "Beware this point for dragons be..." You don't just persuade... you make me think... of fanaticism and its dangers and how one man's evil is another's path to glory. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
(((((((((((((((group))))))))) I adore you good people. This is kind of a one size fits all sorta thing, kinda like a mumu. I was just having a bit of fun making fun of myself again...ice pick headaches, yanno. sigh <--maybe I should stop doing that! My love to you all. I'm gonna go watch tv. exhale. OW |
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