Open Poetry #47 |
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Beware (I rode a horse called Pathos) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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* * * * * Consider both the messenger in equal parts to message, heed. * * * For he who grips the reigns of steed-- that "call-to-arms" alert might be a herald of sincerity done so because the rider bleeds upon the mount of Chivalry. A mighty horse, indeed. But yet? Intention paves infamously the path foreshadowing the streets stamped with the mark of Purity: "Beware this point for dragons be..." Fill-in-the-blanks, or just proceed. Consider options, as you read: This cautionary tale might be written with the very ink of bias, due to view, askewed, by knowledge of the weight of hoof; perhaps, in need of bandaging. * * * Consider both the messenger, in equal parts, to message, heed. * * * * * disclaimer: I don't believe this has anything to do with 9-11. But then again, How would I know? I'm a bit too close to the author to be objective. With hugs, and love, serenity * * * * * |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I will take heed, Enjoyed Serenity, Ms. E |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"This cautionary tale might be written with the very ink of bias, due to view, askewed, by knowledge of the weight of hoof; perhaps, in need of bandaging." Very expressive write but not sure about the horse called pity? Is the horse you rode to be pitted or your misplaced emotion a pity? Sorry for the question, but I'm old and slow, maybe you could explain? JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your poetry is, of course, heedful... and needful by all, whether they realize it or not. Good messages, my dear. ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The horse's name that I rode was Pathos. Not pity. ![]() In retrospect, I kinda pity the Pathos tho. *chuckle* Thanks for reading. ![]() My love to all. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Thanks for the clarification. I thought pathos meant pity. My bad! ![]() enjoyed. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am moved, as you speak of Pathos, with delicacy and knowledge. Bias is a very insidious risk, but our experiences no doubt form our way of thinking. Your eyes are clear, no bandage needed. Love, Margherita |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karen...Sounds like to me Plathos referring to you is tired and in need of a rest. A mother protecting her family comes to mind while reading the following. A mighty horse, indeed. But yet? Intention paves infamously the path foreshadowing the streets stamped with the mark of Purity: "Beware this point for dragons be..." I always enjoy reading you and trying to understand the meaning of your poetry. That is half the fun. Enjoyed as always...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (09-13-2011 01:27 PM).] |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this alot |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Intention paves infamously the path foreshadowing the streets stamped with the mark of Purity: "Beware this point for dragons be..." You don't just persuade... you make me think... of fanaticism and its dangers and how one man's evil is another's path to glory. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
(((((((((((((((group))))))))) I adore you good people. ![]() This is kind of a one size fits all sorta thing, kinda like a mumu. ![]() I was just having a bit of fun making fun of myself again...ice pick headaches, yanno. sigh ![]() My love to you all. I'm gonna go watch tv. exhale. ![]() |
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