Open Poetry #47 |
9/11 Trilogy |
Balladeer
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*WAITING FOR THE CALL* He sits there at the kitchen table In the solitude Somber eyes reflect the depth Of melancholy mood.. No sound intrudes to break the spell Of stillness in the night..... Alone he sits attentively Preparing for the fight. His hands are filled with wrinkles now His cheeks are furrowed deep.. A small tear streaks down gnarly face Of one who never weeps. His spine is upright as he sits With small phone by his side... Mind races back to years ago When many thousands died. He feels the rock of landing craft From movement of the sea As bullets whiz by overhead From shores on Normandy... On Iwo Jima he recalls Tears falling from his eye To watch Old Glory proudly stand Against the eastern sky. Now all he sees are images From television screen His mind still keen enough to know What falling buildings mean... His country will soon be at war To save democracy And keep the world the kind of place Whre man can still live free. He sits there waiting, Khaki-clad, A gold bar on his cap A Browning rifle by his side And helmet on his lap.. Senility has weakened him Though you won't see him fall.. He sits there waiting......ready For his President to call.... ***************************************************** *THE DAY THEY MADE MY LADY CRY* She stood there with her torch held high To watch planes falling from the sky As silver bullets ripped apart The center of her loving heart With disregard for sanity In senseless act of lunacy She saw her children fall and die The day I saw my lady cry. I LIFT MY LAMP....so reads her plaque Just miles from terrorist attack Her open doors now violated By pure evil orchestrated Hounds of Hell have been released And Good must rise to kill the Beast. I saw her head droop, shaking "Why?" The day I saw my lady cry. Her tears will bring on bitter rain Unleashing winds of hurricane To circle globe in whirlwind force Uncover evil at its source Then seek exacting recompense From those who prey on innocents. They'll not forget, as time goes by, The day they made my lady cry. ***************************************************** *TOMORROW* Tomorrow smile at someone That you've never seen before. Take time to think of others that You feel compassion for. Tomorrow tell somebody That they brighten up your day. Let random acts of kindness Put your feelings on display. Tomorrow hug your children Somewhat tighter than before. Be sure to think of all the things You can be thankful for. Pat your dog a little longer. Hug and kiss your husband/wife. Thank your God for granting you Another day of life. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I liked this. ~~ "Government is not reason; it is not eloquent. It is force. Like fire, it is a dangerous servant and a fearful master." --George Washington ~~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Mike...Great tribute trilogy. May Old Glory fly free forever. Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Dear sweet 'Deer I got a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes. The last poem's call for love and tenderness just did me in. All 3 poems were perfect complements to each other. But that is no surprise coming from you. Bravo! Lori |
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Balladeer
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Thank you, Jerry. Paul...may it indeed! Glad you enjoyed.. Lori..thank you for sharing your emotions with me. Yes, we should treat every day as special. Thousands on that day never saw another one. Hugs to you, my friend |
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Denise
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Beautiful tribute, Michael. Bless you. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
These are great writings as usual. You, my friend, always brighten my day whenever I read your work. You're the BEST! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Excellent! Anyone who carried the BAR is welcome at my table. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
The very secret to life is the last four lines of your wonderful trilogy. Take care m'friend. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Wonderful trilogy, Deer. Perfect time for it. Ida |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Thank you Balladeer for your wonderful words, they touch me so, Ms. E |
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Balladeer
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Thank you, ladies....and icebox. I wish they were poems that had never had a reason to be written. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
a fine Trilogy...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Exquisite and so rich in emotions that culminate in TOMORROW. Love and peace. Margherita |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Nice write. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I loved these individually... and they have even more impact as a trilogy! The poignant "Waiting" is so deeply touching and I can't ever make it through "Lady" without weeping... Thank you for including "Tomorrow"... for the wisdom... for the hope. *S* |
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