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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
dentist chair the hygienist removes my bluetooth moonlit night my girlfriend and I holding hand-helds winter solitude all my facebook friends deleted by mistake --flash [This message has been edited by flash (09-10-2011 07:51 PM).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very clever, flash! I especially like the bluetooth...great humor there!!  |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
Thanks Ballladeer for your generous comments and preference! --flash |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
All 3 are delightful and evoked giggles from me. I think the middle one is the funniest! Funny how we always want to say which we like the best - pondering on that. Owl |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
Owl: Glad they brought a giggle or two. Laughter is the best medicine! flash |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
oh, oh, oh ... these are delightful! You are the future oriented specialist! M |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
Marghenita: Thanks for your generous comment. Funny you should mention "future specialist" because I love to write cyber-age senryu and will post a few more--for your anticipated enjoyment. best, flash |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Good John . |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
thanks, John! --flash |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Enjoyed! JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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