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Moon Touch |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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MOON TOUCH 10 September 2011 And a shadow passed over the moon and for a moment I felt your breath on the back of my neck and I curved my shoulders up and my head back around your whispers, my inspiration, my Heathcliff, my Darcy, my Clyde, my Crocodile Dundee. Owl |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Elegant and so very emotional! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Charly. Smiles. Owl |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow, innermost emotional depiction. Enjoyed the read. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa |
Oh, this is so eloquent and beautiful. I absolutely loved the love in this! Aenea "I'll tell you how the sun rose |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Such elegance and then there was Crocodile Dundee . . . It was truly a touching piece, Owl. ~~ The only reason I would take up walking is so that I could hear heavy breathing again. ~~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, JL. Smiles. Thank you, Aenea. Glad you did. Smiles. Thank you, Jerry. In my humble opinion, Crocodile Dundee has more of his own (or perhaps I should say my) kind of elegance and appeal than all of Heathcliff, Darcy and Clyde put together. Smiles. Owl |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
Very poignant with strong emotional impact! Enjoyed the read, Al |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
my inspiration No doubt about that, dear Diana! Very lovely! Love, Margherita |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Passionate, loved it, Ms. E |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I felt your breath on the back of my neck and I curved my shoulders up and my head back around your whispers, You wrote the touch so beautifully I felt the hairs on my neck rise... simply lovely! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I have goose flesh reading this, Diana. It's so alive! Lovely poem! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
How many of us actually turned our neck up and rolled it back to feel that soft whisper as a light breeze? I know I did. beautiful writing. jo |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Flash. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you, Margherita. Giggles. Thank you, eg. Glad you liked it. Thank you, Ruth, for your kind words and appreciation. Thank you, Karen. Glad you felt it so well. Thank you, Jo – what a delightful way to respond to my poem and to say so! Owl |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Very CUTE!!! the title caught me ... the moon can be such a romanic topic for poetry!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Gave me goose-bumps, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Angel4aKing and Kat. Owl |
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