Open Poetry #47 |
...To the Heroes... |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
9-16-2001...Early on in Passions [9/7/99] I posted this in tribute of our military...as I searched for "quiet" today, as my mind comes up with nothing new to share, I found this. It is slightly revised from the original. I do hope it will give you a little "peace and quiet" for your soul. KRJ To The Heroes Through the news I heard you’d passed away; as if by God’s hand the skies turned gray. Now memories are mine, they come to stay because you, my hero, have no more to say. I know you’d rather a hero’s mantle not wear but I’ve placed it o’er your shoulders with care for when decisions were needed, you’d not spare a moment’s breath, you would rise to ensnare the villain that came with threats to impart and seeing evil in villain’s cold, cruel heart, because you were trained well and so complete the villains left quickly their pilot’s seat. A suit of armor was your uniformed cloth caring for all men, take the villain at “no cost”, whether your life hung upon the thin balanced brim your only thought to rid us of him. Today is too, too quiet, the ground cold and still a hero today buried, and now a United will that a fight be fought over lands thus caught between the religions of men, for Peace that is sought. ©KRJ revised 21 September 2001 original 7 September, 1999 |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
To the heroes! Excellent write Sunshine. A fitting tribute. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine words for all the heroes...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
This was special, Sunshine, and it firts the occasion perfectly I believe. ~~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~~ |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Wonderful tribute to our heroes, nicely done! Kat >^..^< |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very sensitive tribute to the men who sacrificed their lives to save others ... Thank you, dear Karilea. Love and peace. Margherita |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Excellent work. Thank you for reposting this! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'll try to get a special something scanned for you... thank you k. (If I get it done, you'll understand why this is so moving to me.) |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Karilea. The line that I found most touching is the first line of the last stanza. It is inexplicably horrifying that this was done in the name of religion. Owl |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Excellent and thoughtful, Sunshine, Ms. E |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wonderful tribute, Sunshiney One! |
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