Open Poetry #47 |
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September 8, 2011 |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
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I watch as you perform Act. Reprocess scripted emotions That they might become real And all I can focus on Are the muscles in your shoulders As they flex, your hands as they move to cover your face And my mind wanders to the feel Of them on my skin Where cold gives way to warmth Where desire gives way to passion Where friendship gives way to love It’s all I can do To not run down Grab your hands And whisk you away To a space entirely our own So that we might know again that moment Where cold gives way to warmth Where desire gives way to passion Where friendship gives way to love And as I consider this I am almost there In the place Where we are You and I Instead of You And I. That union Where two become one Where the emptiness is filled In more ways than one Where cold gives way to warmth Where desire gives way to passion Where friendship gives way to Love. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great blend of what you're seeing with what you're feeling! And I love the repetition of the lines Where cold gives way to warmth Where desire gives way to passion Where friendship gives way to love |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So beautiful! You recreate the moment in a very captivating way. Love, M |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heartbreaking verses here, truly dripping with tears of emotion. ~~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~~ |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Enjoyed your poem, Ms.E |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
Thank you, all. ![]() |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
very nice...very |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Enjoyed your write! Excellent. JL ![]() Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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