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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2011-09-07 08:59 AM


When Balladeer was younger folks
he went to visit Ron
Layed over in Milwaukee
and then, on to Colon

While visiting a strip club folks
"Deer" jumped up on the stage
Reactions of the patrons might
be difficult to gauge

I hope for telling you this tale
my friend will hold me blameless
I only know that he's the "Deer"
that made Milwaukee shameless.

© Copyright 2011 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2011-09-07 09:37 AM


Ha! Good one! this may be my favorite. 'Deer at a strip club...I got a  dollar bill waiting to see that
Lori

Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2011-09-07 09:59 AM


Lori,
Thanks, you may not be giving him enough credit, you might want to up that to a five spot, lol.
Doc

JL
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3 posted 2011-09-07 04:37 PM


#1
Is this a true story?
I think I saw him on a rerun of Lavern and Shirley.  Or was that Elvis?

"Schlemiel, schlimazel, hasenpfeffer incorporated!"

Enjoyed!!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Balladeer
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4 posted 2011-09-07 06:18 PM


Lori, stick in a fiver and fish around for change!
Dr.Moose1
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5 posted 2011-09-07 08:08 PM


JL,
Ah, the good ol' days. Yours, Andy Griffen, M.A.S.H, Taxi, Cheers, The Odd Couple, Rocky and Bullwinkle (of course) and so many more. Waxing nostalgic, kindred spirits of a bygone era.
Be well M'friend.
Doc

Balladeer,
My good friend, "lol" just won't do, I am actually laughing out loud. This has been, and continues to be, one of my most favorite journeys into the realms of absurdity ever. I sincerely hope you're enjoying this as much as I.
Doc

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6 posted 2011-09-07 09:47 PM


ROFLMAO... Doc, not only is this one of if not THE best... but it got the best response from Deer! LOL Suffice it to say... I loved it!
Dr.Moose1
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7 posted 2011-09-07 10:04 PM


suthern,
Dear gal, if my attempts to amuse or bring a moment of joy to anyone succeed, I am living in the moment, and, enjoying it tremendously. Thank you.
Doc

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (09-08-2011 07:03 AM).]

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