Open Poetry #47 |
Changing Loyalties |
pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
Oh, Pen and Paper, how I've missed you Companion, soulmate, mine To you, and only you, I reveal That to which all the world is blind I fault them not For fault is mine own and Without revelation, though in another's bed I lie, I'll never be truly known ...to reveal to others That which is known only to you, Would that not be adultery? Irony, that sin be found in truth You are mine and I am yours But...I am someone else's too, you see... And as you neither smile nor bring me to laugh, My loyalty goes to he |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Cute and intriguing piece. I am certain that those who "bring us to laugh" have got one chance more than the others. M |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Third stanza is my absolute favorite. It's deep and relate-able. Well done on this. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Interestingly and well thought out ode to the paper and pen. Well done! ~~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very creative thought, and write. Enjoyed. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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