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Open Poetry #47

September

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2011-09-05 11:23 PM

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The moon glides low
Over silent meadows
A river flows
Toward an open sea

What then now is
If only as symbol
Oak leaves rustle
In a passing breeze

The small white house
A single candle
Where once was love
Is always home

Deer come down
Through autumn shadows
To lick white salt
From colored stone

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Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2011-09-06 04:57 AM

quote:
Where once was love
is always home

And rising melancholy is healed.

Beautiful!

M

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2011-09-06 08:53 AM

The small white house
A single candle
Where once was love
Is always home

These lines really touched me... beautiful write!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2011-09-06 11:42 AM

beautiful! Sept krept in so fast, I hardly had time to enjoy summer? Where does the time go?

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2011-09-06 11:49 AM

Beautifully rendered, Huan.

~~ How come abbreviated is such a long word? ~~

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2011-09-08 05:03 AM

Excellent poetry..composition, delivery, theme, and ending.

Come read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling
And banish the thoughts of day.
Longfellow

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