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woman with touch colors on
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woman with touch colors on |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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woman of swallow songs dancing in the indigo wound of water wearing only the touch colors revealing nothing to man hands of eye but covering nothing from the mind sharing only the touch colors woman of distant in dreams gift speaker of tomorrow in dawn baring only the touch colors of yesterday you give visions like balm and your fingers make residue peaceful touching only the touch colors thy rod and thy staff are hewn from tears then kissed supple by thy own lips touching only the perhaps of whisper woman of lovely, with touch colors on ___________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You speak of this "woman of lovely" and your words are amazingly tender and beautiful, as they reveal your own kind of lovely, showing a sensitivity to the colors of life that captivates deeply. Excellent! Love, Margherita |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
From title to end this is one beautiful piece of poetry. Your writing is mesmerizing. Ali-san |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
woman of distant in dreams gift speaker of tomorrow in dawn baring only the touch colors of yesterday you give visions like balm and your fingers make residue peaceful touching only the touch colors This settles into my mind so gently... you write tender terrificly! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thank you lady friend _______________ ms ali-san, thanks little one _____________ ms suthern..thank you for leaning close ms |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank YOU. Reading your poetry is truly a pleasure. Ali-san |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
She sounds lovely Dark, I hope sees you as lovely too, Ms. E |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san. thank you little one ______________ ms E...perhaps one will never know how she sees me..do trees talk? do stones have voices...does the sky recite poetry? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You leave much to the imagination, but as always, you leave well sung in your wake. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sweetsun, thank you babe for the sexy eyes |
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