Open Poetry #47 |
where grew the rose |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
where grew the rose There is frost where grew the rose and a lingering touch of sadness in this vacant moon of summer passing to the colored tumult of Autumn harmonies and winter sorrows. Our lives are the infinitesimally smallest ripples on the boundless cyclic-sea of time, so cast you mind-net into the endless, eternal cosmic void and catch what starry dreams you may. --- b. e. adams (9/2/2011) |
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vergie New Member
since 2011-09-02
Posts 8Hiding inTexas |
Oh, this is just breathtakingly beautiful, secondhanddreampoet, To be competent enough to write such a poem is truly remarkable. I think you should called yourself firsthanddreampoet. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sad begining, with deep thoughtful musings and a warning message to end...enjoyed your mind waves... Thank you for the words, thoughts and message... Goldenrose. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"so cast your mind net into the endless void and catch what starry dreams you may." One of your best ever, Bruce. A definite KEEPER for me. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Awesome, dear Bruce! Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Exquisitely beautiful, Bruce, and hauntingly sad. Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So very beautiful!! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, I love this. Just love it ~ enough said. A |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"There is frost where grew the rose and a lingering touch of sadness in this vacant moon of summer passing" Enjoyed the write. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
Yes, vergie is right, firsthanddreampoet, Enjoyed, Ms. E |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nicely done, enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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