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passing shadows
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0 posted 2011-08-30 09:08 PM



I guess I'm going to Cali
since the law has it out for me
and I don't have long

3 years on the run, and I'm still running wild
saying they won't catch me
but someday they will.

It reads like a song sometimes.
Just listen and you might hear it all
in the middle of your starry night
where the moon lights up the whole place

and you don't have to wait till fall.

Itsy bitsy spider, crawling up the water spout.
Down came the rain and washed the spider out.

Hanging over my head.


© Copyright 2011 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2011-08-30 09:54 PM


Uh, they say Cali is nice this time if year. Well, to tell the truth, passing shadows, they say that Cali is nice at any time of the year. Don't go out there in a flashy car, don't speed, and obey all traffic signs and laws.

If you can't do any of the above because you are SUCH a renegade, drive to Cali in style in a fire-engine red Lamborghini Miura SV, loaded down with the drug of your choice, and automatic weapons you will need for the shootout.

Be careful either way, ya heah?

~ I like long walks, especially when they are taken by people who annoy me. ~

Angel4aKing
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2 posted 2011-08-31 03:08 AM


BE watchin for ya on Americas Most Wanted lol ... don't worry tho I won't tell them you were here on pip K? LMAO good luck!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Margherita
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3 posted 2011-08-31 03:47 AM


It must feel like a Sword of Damocles, dear Dixie. You render your anxiety so well. May there be a way out back into serenity.

Love,
Margherita

JL
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4 posted 2011-08-31 12:00 PM


Sometimes the end of the rope is a good place to let go, and start out again.

Nice write, but California?
Really?


JL



Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

passing shadows
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5 posted 2011-08-31 06:36 PM


my grandbaby is there

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6 posted 2011-08-31 10:07 PM


And those grandbabies are magnets. *S* Be good to you!
Goldenrose
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7 posted 2011-09-01 05:31 AM


There may be lots of poems in an adventure like that Dixie?

Take care and good luck, keep finding internet cafes etc and post those poems...im sure those on these pages will care how you are?

Goldenrose.

Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron.

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