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Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

0 posted 2011-01-05 04:30 AM

my left shoulder
and my heart, together, sent
a circle to twirl
over me; a perseverant one
ah, is that strength I feel
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..Copyright 2011 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Harmony;
reaching into the poet's heart
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mikeandrew
Member

since 2010-11-18

Posts 198

1 posted 2011-01-05 07:25 AM

a unique poem indeed sir sounds like an ancient Greek poem very interesting.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

2 posted 2011-01-05 07:47 AM

Interesting indeed. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

When you decide to walk away- walk away. Don't look back, In that moment you'll lose trust and faith- in yourself.

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

3 posted 2011-01-05 10:08 AM

..mikeandrew and Trina..>>thanks much for reading my poem; i appreciate your comments..>>spiros

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2011-01-05 02:11 PM

I believe it is that special strength when it's needed the most and how cleverly worded this is Spiros.

A talented write.

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2011-01-05 07:22 PM

When one might love self
selflessly, to conquer fright
gently talk to night

~*~

Smiling, my friend.

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

6 posted 2011-01-05 10:07 PM

..thanks Eric..you're very kind
..thanks Karilea; i'm pretty sure i
understand your poem and i like it..>>spiros
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..Sunshine's (Karilea's) poem:

When one might love self
selflessly, to conquer fright
gently talk to night
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2011-01-09 09:56 PM

Nice...James

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

8 posted 2011-01-10 01:40 AM

..hey, JamesMichael..>>kind of you to
read my poem and to comment; thanks

..>>spiros
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