Open Poetry #47 |
We'll Always Have Paris |
Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
In Paris they have "whitening booths" because of the street mimes The waiting lines are always long 'cause whitening takes time I've tried to keep this short and sweet at least that was my plan So translated from French I'd say that mime waits for no tan |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Okay, now it is Lori's turn to best this, today's fun-time-poem winner. ~ I like long walks, especially when they are taken by people who annoy me. ~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Doc, you need medical attention....at least your puns do! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
JerryPat, Thanks, let the fun times roll. Doc Balladeer, Give me a break man, I set this up and delivered the punchline in two stanzas on this one. Not an easy feat by any means, let's see your stuff, I just know you've been sand bagging me, lol. Doc |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Doc, your puns are quite inane. I mean, you just don't use your brain. You should know better but you're too vain. In Paris you would be in Seine! You needed TWO stanzas??????????? |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Balladeer, Lol, m'friend , lol, I'll give you cudos when you top my "deli" post. Doc |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You two are making the end of my very long day somewhat delightful. A |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Yeah, yeah, ok... But Paris you can keep. Home of the mighty frogs. JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Alison, Thanks, glad to be of service, lol. Doc JL, Thanks, "whitening booths for mimes", hey, maybe it'll catch on over here, lol. Doc |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
so do you think of the puns first then come up with the rest of the poems or do you start with the poem and see where you end up? enjoyed them all M |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
nakd, Thanks, trade secret, lol. No, I go with the pun first, and then try to piece it together. Doc |
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