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renshu of wind
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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with the dawn I am renshu of wind moving your leaves around the sun leaving the dark sides turned open your stone knows my texture like water but I leave her with a dry comfort she remains still within my music I bring moisture to your dry eyes and sooth your glances that are weeping I whisper of your ways when you sleep when you run fast I slow you safely and when you tire of running against me I am behind you giving you new day wings with the evening I am renshu of wind _____________ daark (renshu, like repeating of repeating) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Repetition is a very, very good thing when done softly at times.  Excellent... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sweetsun, thank you lady friend |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
this one is very dreamy ... made me sleepy...very HyPn@tIc!!!  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms king....thanks lady...hope you are not driving... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I am behind you giving you new day wings Absolutely wonderful! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern, thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I love every line and the quoted one especially. You are talking of devotion here, whether for a woman or for another kind of passion and by Jove you do it like a Master. But how good it is that you still go on practicing ...  Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Mar, a love of the earth is what whispers here. Thank you ms |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the repeating wind!! I shall savor the hint of breeze and every storm that comes to pass.... Nice D~ *dude* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: wow ... with your specification, dear D., this poem's brilliance increases even more (if possible!) Love, M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue, thanks for your pretty songs ms _____________ ms mar, thank you lady friend for your reviews and smiles |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
"When you run fast I slow you safely and when you tire of running against me I am behind you giving you new day wings" Beautiful Dark, Ms. E |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms E...thanks lady friend |
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